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Q&A: Help me Edit This!!?

Question by 6DNAL: Help me Edit This!!?
I have to write an essay for school. I need some proffesional editing help. Tell me how I can improve the following two paragraphs:
“Born in 1943, during one of the biggest battles in history, I was the first and only child of Maria and Vincenzo Emanuele. I was born [...]